Saturday, December 22, 2012

S W A N S

Someday I will be the swan
The swan that you'll be proud of
You are too good to be with a duck
A duck with paralyzed love

The former chapter of your book looks amazing
Somebody should tear them off dramatizing
Could I be the last chapter
Or would there be a next sequel after?

White swan flying
Black swan crying
Grey swan dying
They all are whores
Coming through different doors
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2 comments:

  1. Holla...

    Hihihi akhirnya bisa mampir lagi Vey!

    Pas liat judul-nya, langsung ta' baca, punya firasat bakalan 'great' banget soalnya. And see? Beneran kan firasat aku...

    Aduh Vey! Coba sih bakat kamu yang ini tularin ke aku. Sumpah ngiri abis euy. Diksi-nya itu lho yang bikin aku ngiri, kata-kata yang diumpamainnya ntu...

    Okay, ini part fave aku:

    "The former chapter of your book looks amazing
    Somebody should tear them off dramatizing
    Could I be the last chapter
    Or would there be a next sequel after?

    White swan flying
    Black swan crying
    Grey swan dying
    They all are whores
    Coming through different doors"

    Huaaah apalagi bagian ending-nya ntu lho Vey hiks bagus banget..

    *repeh teu bisa nanaon bakat ku tersepona. Vey pokona teteh kudu kursus ieu mah ka Vey*

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  2. Waduh, si teteh mah bisa wae... Puguh anjeuna anu tos master. Tiasa atuh urang saling share karya2 celotehan urang yuk ;)

    Hatur nuhun tos mampir tetehku...

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